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A gentle reminder to please read RIGHT TO LEFT as I think it will affect not only the dialogue but more importantly the timing of some of aniki's whipped faces

























Thanks for reading.

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Rowena Yow
Nov. 18th, 2011 03:34 am (UTC)
Awww
Very sweet...and the art is beautiful...I love all the detail and how well it all flowed together....Very natural....I had to reread to pay more attention to the art because it was so natural in the first read, you don't notice the bg....that's an accomplishment!! If this is being sold at cf, I will hunt it down and buy it. XD
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 01:54 am (UTC)
Re: Awww
Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) And wah yess see you at CF, I'm really looking forward to it!!
sailorsirius
Nov. 18th, 2011 04:01 am (UTC)
A-Aww that was so sweet. ;w; I just- And beautifully done too with the art. That was wonderful. Great job! Very touching!
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 01:55 am (UTC)
That sparkling Mouri in your icon warms my heart ;_;

And thanks for your kind words, I'm really glad you liked it!
ansemaru
Nov. 18th, 2011 04:40 am (UTC)
Ahhhhhh, this was fantastic. Such a beautiful comic- reading it felt like the smell of honeysuckle. Perhaps confusing my senses here, but it was fabulous max.
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 01:58 am (UTC)
sdfjksldf appropriate.. icon

Thanks so much for reading! Yes the penguin was intentional, although I haven't watched pingdrum beyond ep 11 :( need to remedy that but it seems like a bad time to try catching up?? From what I gather there is so much suspense and Ikuhara trolling ahaha
llyse
Nov. 18th, 2011 04:43 am (UTC)
Crying nao.

Eh ooh is this going to be sold at CF? /hopeful
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:02 am (UTC)
It is a happy ending (of sorts...), don't cry!

Um there will be a Basara book of questionable content at CF (between amei wredwrat myung and me)! Not sure if I will print this one because it wasn't very basaraish orz

Does this mean you are going to be at CF? :D come cry over Basaraaarghs with us!
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jellocomics
Nov. 18th, 2011 04:56 am (UTC)
This is amazing. Thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed it so much.
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:03 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading :)
cessin
Nov. 18th, 2011 07:31 am (UTC)
I love this, thanks so much for posting it! <333
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:04 am (UTC)
Aww thank you for reading :) I'm glad you liked it!
illereyn
Nov. 18th, 2011 07:35 am (UTC)
this is beautiful and real and sweet and detailed! Love your drawing style, how youtell so much of the story without words
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:08 am (UTC)
Haha a good part of the dialogue was stuff I've either actually said or felt like saying. Motonari is my inner spirit animal I guess, sob

Thanks so much for your kind words. Umm wordless stories like Shaun Tan's The Arrival or Jiro Taniguchi's The Walking Man have been really great inspirations to me, if you can hunt them down I think you would really enjoy them!
opossum_art
Nov. 18th, 2011 07:40 am (UTC)
very beautiful - both art and story!
(and for some reason I really like these plush toys :)
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:09 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading :) the penguin toy is from Mawaru Penguindrum, I think there should be actual merchandise soon (I will be disappointed if not!!)

The whale shark toy I vaguely remember being sold at the Osaka aquarium, but I don't remember it in detail so I made it up ;;
vhplant
Nov. 18th, 2011 08:05 am (UTC)
awwwww, this was really beautiful
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:09 am (UTC)
Aww thank you for your kind words :') I'm glad you enjoyed it!
raineyz
Nov. 18th, 2011 11:40 am (UTC)
しあわせとうちindeed
Actually my heart kind of stopped for two seconds when my friends page loaded and I saw this. Then I read it and almost exploded from an overabundance of FEELINGS. This whole thing is just so beautiful. Please continue to bless us all with your art and stories Hwei ;w;
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:26 am (UTC)
Re: しあわせとうちindeed
Haha I was playing Mouri's blue route last week and weeping into my controller, it took a lot of pixiv trawling to overcome my feelings. Forever a side effect of setouchi.

Thanks so much for your kind words rainey ;_; I'm really really really glad you liked it.
sesame_seed
Nov. 18th, 2011 12:56 pm (UTC)
♥ the stuffed animals! And ♥ the sweetness of this, though I have no idea who the characters are; much needed after an overdose of he-died-young-no-he-got-married-no-they-both-died-tragically-but-beautifully Cfic.

Why are you so awesome?
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 02:31 am (UTC)
Chrissieeeeeeeeeeeeeee <3

Thanks so much for reading this even though I have not even tried to make you play basara and you have no idea who these people are meant to be (they are pretty tragic and keep yelling at and killing each other in game sob)

(D-do you still watch anime there is a wonderful series called Mawaru Penguindrum ;_; that's where the penguin is from)
karlyl
Nov. 18th, 2011 03:48 pm (UTC)
That was so lovely ^_^
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 03:19 am (UTC)
Aww I am glad you liked it! Thank you for reading :)
una_clover
Nov. 18th, 2011 06:10 pm (UTC)
So sweet and beautiful:3 I like very much how you drew Nari's hair.
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 03:23 am (UTC)
Ohh god his hair looks so badly damaged in the third game under his hat, I seem to have forgotten that.

Thanks for your kind words :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
bellicosus
Nov. 18th, 2011 07:17 pm (UTC)
IT'S LIKE YOU HAVE GIVEN ME ALL THE BEAUTIFUL THINGS AND I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH THEM.

I know next to nothing about the Sengoku Basara (?) series, but your lines are always effortlessly elegant and endless joy to look upon. ♥ ♥
tongari
Nov. 19th, 2011 03:23 am (UTC)
Awwww thank you so much for reading even though you're not familiar with the series ;_; I felt it was not very basaraish, but wasn't really sure. Thanks so much for your kind words!
octavius_x
Nov. 18th, 2011 09:51 pm (UTC)
I also know very little about Sengoku Basara other than "Eyepatch man" and "smaller man who wears green" but I really enjoyed this. Aside from the amazing art, there's the pacing and the simplicity and elegance of the wording; in particular this: The ocean is so wide. The world is so big. And my happiness is so small.

Loved it.
tongari
Nov. 21st, 2011 03:15 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it despite minimal knowledge of the characters. Although they are pretty unrecognizable here, ahaha. I thought about making it a non basara story but half the fun is I guess rewriting the incredibly sad endings into semi happy ones..
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